I came humming into your port to wish you a happy anniversary. I love the drama created in here, and the imagery used. I just wondered why this serial killer killed all the people like that. All the victims seemed innocent.
“ A letter?” Jack said, surmise in his voice. I found a little typo in this sentence. Correct that, and it will be much better. And include a reason for all the slaying. Keep writing!
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