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Hello jimmyfin I really like the Terzanelle form, and you do a great job working with it here. You've obviously chosen your words carefully and your repeating lines are particularly strong. The poem is suitably emotional given its theme of lost / absent love but it's well controlled, never getting melodramatic or overly sentimental. This was a pleasure to read. I'm sure many readers will be able to relate to the subject matter. I know I can. Congratulations on having this featured in the poetry newsletter. Best wishes, Mark ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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