Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...the last of your suggestions...

First impressions...absolutely Loved this one! Very cute and humorous...just what I expect from you!

Was the title interesting...yes, it leaves the reader wanting to explore it further

Was the content rating appropriate...yes

Did you use a specific form of poetry...none other than Quatrain

Did you follow the form...yes

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...abab, cdcd, ...

Did the rhymes seem forced...not at all. Again you have a way with words where everything fits perfectly together

Were words forced to fit syllable count...no, they poem flows very nicely with out any flaw

Was there rhythm and flow...yes, your use of alliteration, rhyme, and internal rhyme create a wonderful piece

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...
should this line be

Gluttony's on top my list; or Gluttony's on top of my list;

Things I would change...nothing other than the statement above

Favorite parts/lines...
This line is SO YOU...

Pride is one I think is sneaky.
I feel, at times, "how great is me!"
Perhaps that feeling is uncouth –
but then I think it’s just the truth.

Another excellent job!


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