Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...you had the winning bid on my auction package!

First impressions...I really enjoyed this piece. I read it first and the n read it aloud. The presentation is wonderful and lends itself to be read aloud perfectly.

Was the title interesting...Yes, because I had no idea where Dingle was and was interested in finding out.

Was the content rating appropriate...absolutely

Did you use a specific form of poetry...I didn't note a particular form except for Quatrain, please let me know if it was a different form.

Did you follow the form...yes

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...abcb...

Did the rhymes seem forced...not at all, each line lead perfectly into the next. Nothing seemed forced at all and the poem flowed greatly from line to line and stanza to stanza

Were words forced to fit syllable count...no

Was there rhythm and flow...You did a wonderful job with rhythm and flow with this piece. I really enjoyed reading it aloud which is the true sign of a great poem!

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...none noted

Things I would change...In the last stanza I would change only one little thing...

you wrote
Enjoyed Murphy's sticky toffee pudding,

I would take out the 'sticky' because it makes the line long and cumbersome compared to the rest of the poem

Favorite parts/lines...
I can not choose just one set of lines. I enjoyed the whole piece and the imagery was fantastic!

Excellent work!

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