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Given: Jan 16, 2015 at 2:19am
Length: 614 Characters |
609 w/o WritingML
At first I thought 'tissue tents?' as I read the first verse. I was thinking of us kids, not the toys. lol
The second verse set me straight, and made me think of my youngest son. Fortunately he left the tissues alone. lol
So many kids played war and didn't go to war. However, you are right, many do. My youngest son didn't and he had me (ex soldier) as a mom and his friend didn't but he went into the marines.
This was a thought provoking piece and I appreciate the chance to do that. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing. I don't give 5's very often. None so far this month.
love, LinnAnn
You responded to this review 01/16/2015 @ 7:42am EST
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