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Hello Lizzibear Author Icon

This is a well-constructed, thoughtful poem on the collision between past, present and future. Your use of rhyme helps give the poem a good pace and rhythm.

Congratulations on the honourable mention you got for this in the poetry newsletter.

Keep writing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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