Writing about the hunted in their POV. Good plan and executed well. Form and structure are square. Rhyming is consistent and melodious. Flow is gossamer thin and smooth. Pace is slow as the reader takes in the implications of the final lines. Thought provoking words don in a poetic way. Awesome! Write on! Copenator out! BA, M Div ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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