First impression: Oh I've felt that chill before.
The word pictures you paint are masterful.
The reader is in the scene, experiencing the emotional tags.
Your handle is WilliamWriter, and writing is your forte.

Form and structure are standard sonnet form.
Rhyme scheme lends melody to the scene.
Flow is lilting and song worthy.
Pace is fast but not at all dull.

Grammatically snafu speaking; not a single one is espied.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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