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Your imagery is so vivid.
You use words so livid.
The reader is effectively freaked out.
That bird swooping in and out.

Form and structure are built upon a wall.
Rhyme scheme is constructed so well.
Flow is smooth and sensory filled,
The pace is suspense chilled.

Grammatically snafu free,
Thanks for writing in the WdC!

Copenator out! BA, M Div
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