Hello , I am Thinking-Reed an I have reviewed: A Solemn Voyage. This is a very dark story and gives insight into the feelings around depression. It should remind us that Christmas can be a very sad and difficult time for many people.


Specifics: Generally well-written. I will deal with typos later. The first thing to do is to divide this into about 5 paragraphs and space each with double spacing. This allows the individual points to be looked at one by one. Say para 1 after waking up 2 after seeing the island 3 after seeing the cave 4 the climb and entry to the cave. 5 The last section.


One can feel the emotional pain and loneliness which is very powerfully expressed. Do contact me and we can deal with the specifics. This is good writing and you could go a long way with consistent work.

TR


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