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Hello ANN Counselor, Lesbian & Happy Author Icon

I love acrostics and this is a very fine example on the theme of autumn. You use rhyme well and I like your descriptions. There was just one phrase I was a little unsure of, 'trees so all' didn't quite work for me and I wasn't completely sure of your meaning.

Otherwise an enjoyable read.

Keep writing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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