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Hello spoo952

This is a wonderful little poem in celebration of the wonderful array of colours which Autumn brings. I think the comparison to painting is appropriate. You're also right to say the autumn scene is underappreciated as many people take the autumnal colours for granted and barely see them.

Overall the poem flows very well.

I spotted a couple of errors in your last line, both involving apostrophes. Firstly, 'it's' should be 'its' in the context you mean - no need for the apostrophe there. Secondly the apostrophe in the word 'souls' should come before the s rather than after.

Thanks for sharing your work.

Write on!

Best wishes,
Mark


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