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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hi Jess!

I love this poem so much! It's sad in some ways but positive in others. Very romantic. As usual with you the words flow beautifully and the poem really trips off the tongue. You've shown great creativity with your choice of rhyme words especially in the second stanza.

I think the story you tell here of the romance between night and day and the little time they can spend together (only meeting at dawn and dusk) is wonderful. It kept me captivated from the first word to the last. The things this couple do to honour each other are really sweet and endearing.

What a lovely idea for a poem. Wish I'd thought of it

You've met all the criteria for the campfire, using consonance to excellent effect, working well with the given form and producing another awesome poem.

Really well done!


Lots of love,
Mark


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