}Review number # 5 of week November 6-12th, 2014

Hi Cubby,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Where Did I Go?

First Impression: I wonder that all the time. I look in the mirror and think that the woman looking back is a stranger. I don't see me anymore.

What I liked: The gentle reminder my face is the one my granddaughters know does have scars and wrinkles. The young woman in the picture is a stranger.

What needs your attention: Nothing, it is perfect!

Favorite Parts: Grandma, who's that lady? Is she someone that we know? I could easily see my own granddaughters asking the same questions. It is not easy facing our immortality, nor is it easy to accept the changes that occur beyond our control

Overall Impression: Tears rolled my cheeks, I needed to hear I am not alone seeing a face that does feel like mine. This growing older is not what it is cracked up to be. I remember as a child, I couldn't wait to be an adult. Now, I wonder why I was in such a rush. Retrospect, is interesting don't you think?

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my immense. pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .