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Hello, katabar. My name is Charlie and I'm happy to welcome you to the site with a review today. If you have any questions or need help navigating the site, feel free to email me. Keep in mind that the following is just one reader's opinion. I am not a professional and you know your writing best. If you find something helpful here, use it. If you don't, feel free to disregard this review completely. *Peace2*

*Beakerr* General Impressions: I was just looking through the "Read a Newbie" page when your title jumped out at me. Everyone should have celiac disease? I had to investigate further.

*Beakerb* Best Parts: I can't stop laughing at this. There are so many funny parts. What I like the most though is that you're actually fairly educative while still keeping it satirical. I love the idea of celiac disease being a gift because heaven forbid we eat real food! *Laugh* It sounds like celiac disease would be really difficult to deal with, but I like that you take a comedic view about it. What else are you gonna do?

My favorite line of all was: With a maximum of two meals a day, you've been given the gift of time. You're welcome. Our time is very precious, too bad we have to waste it eating if we don't have celiac disease. *Pthb*

*Beakero* Possible Suggestions: I searched and searched, but I can't really find anything in this piece that needs editing. I looked for grammar mistakes or other possible suggestions, but I'm coming up empty handed. Nice job! *Thumbsup*

*Beakerv* Summary: I loved this satire. It was really funny and informative. Thanks again for sharing with us!

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