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Hi Sharon, How are you?

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Medic! Medic! A man's gone down.

First Impression: It's Veteran day and I decided to see what tributes you had in your port. I vaguely remember you promoting something for Veteran's day last year. I was not disappointed.

What I liked: The poem told a story about a medic that risked his life to do a heroic act.

What needs your attention: Nothing, it reads very well out loud.

Favorite Parts: The chopper swings in from overhead, raining down some American lead. My uncle served in Vietnam and he spoke of crazy helicopter pilots taking risks to pick up wounded men. A good friend of mine was a helicopter pilot in Vietnam as well and he said, proudly no man was lost on his watch. You reminded me of both men's stories about doing what they had too and taking it in stride.

Overall Impression: I do not support war personally but I feel every man and woman that has chosen to serve should be honored and treated with respect. Unfortunately, our country forgets the sacrifices they made, and fails to help them return back once they have served. It is horrible what our men and women on our soil. They talk about bad the enemy is but I am confused at times who is worse.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .