}Review number 1 # of November 6-12th, 2014 week

Hi Sherri,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Swept Away

First Impression: There is no doubt from reading this poem that love has touched your heart, I felt like I was interrupting a special moment with my presence.

What I liked: Swept away to another place, sensuality is what we chase. I love the feeling the images this sentence brings to mind. There is nothing more magical than those moments between two people in love.

What needs your attention: Nothing, It flows well to me.

Favorite Parts: As you probably noticed, I always leave a smile when I have been there. I really love seeing a smile, it makes me feel joy. I loved the line, you flash a smile too. Yes, those moments when one smile leads to another and you can see the twinkle in their eyes the world stands still. Nothing but the other person matters, that is what the poem creates visually in my mind too.

Overall Impression: I feel as a voyeur seeing love unfold, I don't want to move because I might miss every magical moment, yet I don't want to interrupt it either. The poem sweeps you along with every word, inviting you to feel love like this.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my IMMENSE pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .