When love is lost almost everything is lost and a strange loneliness takes over heart and mind. Repenting endlessly for has happened is clearly depicted in this free style poem.

Imagery-
A girl's feelings in the aftermath of having lost a dear person's love are expressed in sharp and effective imagery.
" She sits and stews
Her mind in a whirl."
Good rhythm, well chosen words go a long way in making a poem carry the feelings.

Flow-
Flow to me is the spontaneous out-pour of emotions in short suitable words that move rhythmically. This poem has a good flow. The last stanza sums it up in addition to finding a prop to get back to normalcy, namely, " A cruel twist of fate."

Write on!