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Hi chord0,

I'm reviewing as the judge of "Supernatural Writing Contest - Closed" Open in new Window..

I like this scary poem. The message was clear and the tone was dark before it turned to be positive and light. My favorite part was that the house they went to had screams of the dead *Shock*.

My only question is that I didn't know what made the place free from evil when the persona and his people left.

I think this poem makes for a good story. You should consider writing a story inspired by it.



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