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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Yellow Rose Author Icon,

I'm reviewing as the judge for "Supernatural Writing Contest - Closed" Open in new Window..

I enjoyed this poem very well. I especially liked the flow of it due to its rhyme structure. It didn't feel at all forced.

The supernatural element in it was Big Foot, a creature.

My suggestion is to consider this changing the word to to too in this line: My feet to big to drive

I suggest a more detailed brief introduction such as: . . . and it's green and big.

Well done. Thanks for entering.

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