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Hi Paul D Author Icon,

I'm reviewing as a judge for "Supernatural Writing Contest - Closed" Open in new Window..

I saw that the supernatural element of this sonnet is an angel whose wings are needed by a fallen angel.

I like the rhyme structure of the poem since it makes the poem flow very well. I also like that the dark side of this poem was through loneliness of the angel.

Read the second line of the second stanza. I suggest changing hears to hear.

I wondered why the brief introduction said that the poem is about a fallen angel. To me, the poem is about a lonely angel. I understood that the fallen angel was another character.

Those are my subjective suggestions, so feel free to discard them if you don't think they fit your poem. Thanks for entering.

Write on!          
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