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Review by Lyn's a Wit... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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}Review number #6 of week Oct.30 - Nov.5,2014

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My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: A Summer to Remember

First Impression: What a great opportunity, to be able to hear Waylon Jennings, Roseann Cash and Bachman Turner Overdrive on one cool job.

What I liked: I am always surprised at how young girls act at concerts. I know I am a girl but I never considered taking my clothes off to dance at concert or to flash the band.

What needs your attention: Roseanne Cash is not John's wife, she is his daughter. He had four daughters with Vivian. They are Roseanne, Cathy, Cindy and Tara. He had one son with June, his name is John Carter Cash.

Favorite Parts: I chuckled reading you peeked at girls in the showers at a church camp. I am sure you tried real hard to be stoic. *Facepalm*

Overall Impression: Interesting experience, I am glad you had the opportunity. Waylon was one of my favorite balladeers in his time.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn


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