}Review number 5 # of week October 30- Nov.5, 2014

Hi tHiNg

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Romantica

First Impression: I wondered about Bootes, where the story is going from here.

What I liked: Rebecca's destiny and the mystery I sense behind this poem.

What needs your attention: Nothing, I really enjoyed the intrigue and like filling in the pieces in myself.

Favorite Parts: Betrayal, is it really a one way street. I think Rebecca definitely has choices and this tale of two men could go in either direction.

Overall Impression: I really enjoyed the images that came to mind as I read. I enjoyed exploring your poetry.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .