}Review number 4 # of week Oct. 30-Nov 5th, 2014

Hi Whitemorn

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Seashore Serenity

First Impression: Yay, I would love to be at the ocean instead in the house watching the wind blow. Take me away!

What I liked: The very easy flow of the poem, it has a nice rhythm and does not feel forced when read out loud.

What needs your attention: Nothing.

Favorite Parts: Seagulls singing, squawking is more like it but I do love hearing them. I enjoyed the images you created throughout the poem. One of my favorites is pockets full of nature, all that I can steal. I never thought of it that way when I collect seashells. I am a very good care taker of the shells I have collected.

Overall Impression: A refreshing view of the ocean done in a rhyme pattern that works.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .