}Review number 1 # of week Oct 30-Nov 5, 2014

Hi Ken,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Grim Reaper

First Impression: Wow, he knows his Lento Chain, I concede this one to the master.

What I liked: It flowed very well and did not sound forced when read out loud.

What needs your attention: Not a dang thing.

Favorite Parts: Seems stupid folks abound, deems them all not worth a whit. Amen

Overall Impression: A one star you seek, thou this is supposed to be bad, I am really tempted to shriek, its the best to be had. I cannot suggest a tweak so I will give you a gold.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .