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 Haiku 0008 Open in new Window. [E]
Inspired while watching a meteor shower. There really was a mountain lion very near me.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Stargazer ~ DavidtheDreamer Author Icon

This is a wonderful example of a traditional haiku, dealing with nature as it does so effectively. You make every word count and really evoke the scene for the reader. Such a beautiful poem, it lifted my heart so thank you for that.

Can't think of any way this could be improved and am very happy to give this five stars.

Great job. Keep writing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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