hello Vixey Todd!
This is a Simply Positive Review.

I thought this was a pretty fine storyline. It had the horror, the human frailties and emotions and the moral of the story -- debts must be paid, one way or another.

It had a mixture of preternatural beings and pure reality. Who doesn't understand that when greed is a motivating factor, lives will be ruined. Gambling debts often result in very harsh collection penalties.

Observations:

"Her father was addited to drinking and gambling." [addicted]

"Anna felt something was amiss but decided to let it go in lu of enjoying this rare occasion." [lieu]

"but flinched bakwhen the other two men in Dillon’s entourage blocked him," [back when]


Well done, and a story that adds thrills and the cringe factor so many of us love at this time of year.

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .