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Being Autistic-spectrum, Asperger's, is a defining part of my life, but not controlling.
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Hello Miron Author Icon

This is a very well written, insightful poem expressing a personal experience of Asperger's and the sensory challenges associated with this condition. Being the partner of an Aspie I got a lot out of reading this poem.

You've chosen your words with care and the poem feels polished and well edited. It flows very well. You use rhyme to great effect. Your 'silence/credence' rhyme particularly stood out for me as very creative.

I much enjoyed reading this. I found no errors and am happy to give it a full 5 stars.

Keep writing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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