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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello Aidan Gallows

It's not often that you see Schrodinger's Cat referred to in a poem, even indirectly as here. I'm impressed by your choice of subject matter and think you've handled it very well. I like how you've related a high-concept, scientific thought experiment to the human condition. I'm sure many readers will relate to the feelings you express. I know I've felt at times very similar to how the narrator of this poem feels.

This is a short poem but has a lot of substance.

Your use of couplets and rhyme gives the poem a good pace.

I really enjoyed reading this.

Best wishes,
Mark


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