}Review number # 7 of week Oct.23-29, 2014

Hi Rhyssa,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: My sestina full of banshees and blue hair

First Impression: Yay, she did it. This was a very difficult form to work with.

What I liked: Everything I did proved wrong, sounds like you've been walking in my shoes lately

What needs your attention: nothing!

Favorite Parts: I loved the addition of the hair stylist with blue hair dye. That made me chuckle, especially in the next stanza when you dumped him in blue dye. Perfect! But then you took it even further and bleached his hair white, all I could think of was a smurf. I laughed and laughed as I read. The customer is always right, the hair stylist should know that.

Overall Impression: The contest says that the goal is receive one star, though in my opinion this work should go far, but a rebel I am not, hmmm well, on this topic we shall not dwell.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .