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*Leaf1* Greetings, amy-Finally writing a novel. Author Icon! Thank you for submitting your entry in the "Writing 4 Kids Contest " Open in new Window.. *Smile*

*Reading* What a nice little story. *Smile* You made good use of the prompt! *Thumbsup* I liked how the little witch was hiding from her mom because she didn't want to go witch school. Cute! *Smile*

*Star* Great imagination...

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The little witch looked at Melinda and smiled showing long teeth. The porch light made her yellow skin look sickly. (Great visual, lol! *Bigsmile*)

Have a great day and'
*Leaf3* K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Leaf3*

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