Greetings, Magoo ! Thank you for submitting your entry in the "Writing 4 Kids Contest " .

I loved this!!! I was left with the feeling that the purple pumpkins were eventually going to fib their way into taking over!!! Move over, zombies!!!

Your rhythm and alliteration and rhyme and so on... Wow! Nice work, Magoo! Great job.

Favorite lines...

My mom said, "Purple pumpkins lie,
so trust them not, my son,
a promise they will never keep;
they always fib for fun."

I looked around and heard a sound,
bent down to take a peek;
I focused on that purple one
as it began to speak.


Have a great day and'
K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")


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