Greetings, inky14dinky! Thank you for submitting your entry in the "Writing 4 Kids Contest " .

This is adorably cute! At first, for some reason... I had missed that Henry was a ghost. So all along I was thinking he was a human kid not being able to trick-or-treat. Then when I read "they flew home" I thought how clever of you! So either way, it's a cute story. Nice job.

Favorite lines...

Henry told his mom he would never sneak out again and to this day he remains inside on Halloween till after midnight when he and his mom go out to find all the goodies that get dropped or lost.

Have a great day and'
K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")


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