Greetings, urals!

Interesting comparisons here! It does make you wonder, that's for sure.


I have only suggestion listed below. My reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works, and leave the rest.

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So why the orangutan isn't a human?
This might read smoother is you reworded it...
So why isn't the orangutan a human?

I like how you make the reader think about this. Very interesting!!! Perhaps this should be studied! Nice work.

Have a great day and'
K e e p on W r i t i n g !

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