}Review number # 6 of week Oct. 23-29, 2014

Hi V.G. Medvekoma,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: D14: In Memoriam,

First Impression: Initially, the author indicates that this is too important to be told in third person which made me curious what it was.

What I liked: The way the author chose to disclose the information about the siege. I found it quite interesting. I felt sad for Frederick for losing sight of way his country evolved. He stubbornly held fast to ancient beliefs because he felt that is what was needed instead of leading with the changes the country wanted.

What needs your attention: I didn't see anything I thought needed to be fixed.

Favorite Parts: The conversation Wilheim disclosed about the Monarch being a real person with feelings and concerns. Most people don't really consider that when they think of a leader. They focus on what is wrong and makes them angry. I liked how the author summarized that Frederick's heart is as broken as his nation is. He died as a true leader would want to die.

Overall Impression: I thought this was very well written. The information was provided in a way that the reader could follow very easily along with the story.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .