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 | I Stalk the Night  [13+] image prompt poem in the style of: synchronicity  |
| (4.0)  Welcome to WDC skeason!. I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!   I was drawn to the eery title on the Read A Newbie page and was curious about the Sychronicity form. I have not heard of it.  The poem appears to follow the pattern you give in your sub note! Wow! I can imagine this is a challenge to do and make sense too. Thanks for the convenient information.  Wow! This is dark with potent energy and images. I could read it with ease and it followed a coherent path.The 2 sylavbe words in each verse were well chosen to mirror content of the verses. I would try not to use adevrbs with "LY" as they are not really vivid descriptors--more abstract."small moments" is interesting when I would have thought "short" moments. The voice was strong and consistent and I could hear its edgey tone. I could really imagine this being and its purpose! And I did not see the picture prompt. ! Well done! Thanks for sharing your craft. Keep on musing!Light on the path as you write on! eyestar   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 11/27/2014 @ 11:01pm EST