I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


One can't help but feel sorry for these poor guys. In a ice cold pond just to satisfy their boss and a charity event.
Well, needless to say they start talking. To be quite honest, one would expect at least one that wanted revenge.
Well, true to human nature, there is one. Look out mister boss man.

Well, they get him good.
I love happy endings.
Thank you for sharing.



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