What a wonderful story you have written. I completely understand "The Zone," as you call it. When I was able to walk and run on the Treadmill, I would get up to 4 miles in an hour. The faster I walked the quicker I would get there. When I hit it, man, I could run on the Treadmill and not stop. I loved the feeling.

Some comments:
So what happens to cause this strange happening to occur? You use happen twice here. So you don't have to repeat why not use incidence or any other word you like that is a synonym

It would help if you double poached. It makes it easier for the reader to read..

I really liked you use of the Higher Power. He is always with us, we just forget sometimes.

It appears that you have three paragraphs here and you need to separate them.

These are only suggestions. You can use them or forget them. The main thing is Keep On Writing! You are doing wonderful!

Lynda~Wishbone Laughing Tree

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