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Pelican Outlaws Open in new Window. [ASR]
A Western about pelicans.
by Grateful Jess Author Icon
Review of Pelican Outlaws  Open in new Window.
Review by Shubham Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hello Jess!

This is an interesting piece of free verse poetry! I like how you've written it as a story. In just a few simple words you've covered the prompt. And you've done it very well! I like the last 2 lines and they bring a smile on my face.

The poem also flows well and it didn't break any of the times that I read it out aloud. So great work!

Keep writing, keep smiling,
Shubham
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