Hi, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing your Acrostic poem as part of Poetic Explorations.

You did a wonderful job keeping with the form and making a beautiful poem. I found when I first began writing acrostics that I would only put one word per line and it would end up more of a list than a poem. You have a great poem here where the lines seems to magically line up to say Bluemoon instead of forcing the lines into place. This is so natural it is hard to believe it is an acrostic. Great Job!

You rhythm and flow in enhanced by your use of alliteration throughout the piece. My favorite part was where you refer to the moon's pull on you alluding to the tidal forces the moon has. This is awesome. You have created a wonderful piece that I feel would be great even if it wasn't an acrostic, which to me is a great feat.

Wonderful job and I can't wait to read more of your entries for this group! Keep up the wonderful writing!




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