Hi Satuawany, out to sea,
This is a delightful poem. The tone is a wonderful mix of formal and playful. It catches the reader's interest from the very first word. The reader has fun reading this poem and gets a chuckle from it. This is a very enjoyable read. The rhyme is done extremely well and gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The poem flows well and moves along at a wonderful pace. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading enjoyment. Great job.