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Given: Sep 5, 2014 at 5:11am
Length: 419 Characters |
419 w/o WritingML
Hello Phoenix!
This is a nice poem and I like it. You've maintained the rhyme scheme to abab except for the last stanza which is just 2 lines.
Some lines are too long which breaks the flow and can be fixed by either making the long ones shorter or short ones a little longer.
The content is good and a small few fixes will definitely make you poem great!
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