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Hello, Ann.
Here is review of "Free as a pelican" for 14th wdc birthday sr mod challenge.

*BalloonO* *BalloonB* *BalloonG* What dragged me into your story was not so much the title, as the short description you had underneath. It suggested a lot of fun. And it was funny, indeed. The first half of the story was a bit serious, with a resignation and some big plans for an unknown dream waiting to come true... Nothing betrayed what the second half would bring.

*BalloonV* *BalloonP* *BalloonY* Right after the middle, it became more humorous, the image of the pelicans gathered around to have a meeting was my favorite point. *Smile* Another great image was the one where Martha was walking and a line of pelicans was following her. It reminded me of a mother goose with her little ones following suit. Very cute image.

I really enjoyed your story. Keep writing. Best wishes.

Susan *Beach*

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