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 | Overtime  [13+] He had to work overtime on his wedding anniversary  |
| (4.5)  Hello my friend Prosperous Snow celebrating !! I am here to read your story as I looked their your port I could have spent the afternoon in there. So many great things to read!This story you wrote had me angry in the beginning and I could have throttled him myself.  His poor wife thinking he is having an affair and not taking their anniversary seriously and not even coming home!! As I read on I realized this guy had no clue who he was married to and making some harsh mistakes in answering questions. Still I didn't know what was going on and it held my interest to read on. When the door bell rang I though for sure it would be another woman! Surprised again to find it was a clone. Great job and very creative. The mystery still holds as to why he has a clone. A secret service mission I expect. I only found one little error and nothing to worry about only a typo. When their lips met, she felt as if a robot had kissed her. Before she could say anything, the doorbell ring I believe you meant the doorbell "rang" Thank you so much for sharing this and I really did get a good laugh with some suspense to the whole story. Thanks again!! I will revisit your port and read the other great pieces I wanted to spend time with today.  ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 09/04/2014 @ 12:11pm EDT