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 Still Waiting Open in new Window. [E]
where you go belong, either waiting you're love or forgetting her to end up all?
by GERVIC Author Icon
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Review by Soh ~ Luminousa Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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#2006883 by Legerdemain Author IconMail Icon


First impressions:

This is a simple and heartfelt poem.

My thoughts:

I don't know much about reviewing poems, so I won't comment on the technicalities of the poem.

I could feel the pain of losing the beloved through the verses of the poem. The difficult question of whether to move on or wait makes one an insomniac. He relives and re-experiences the moments spent with her. He feels empty and and lonely.

The question of whether to let go or hold on to the love is resolved in the end i.e. the poet chooses to wait.

My favourite lines:

I am longing for you, my dear
Your presence, your lovely smile
I liked these lines as they are very expressive

In my lifetime I'll use to remember
Keeping it as our simple souvenir.
This is a sweet way of cherishing the memory

Final thoughts:

I liked this poem. Though it is short and simple, it contains the deep feeling of longing, sorrow and heart break. *Thumbsup*

Soh


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