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Hi there, murphyco

Teerich - 2019 Author Icon here with a review from the *Heart*

I am a writer just like you.
I am not here to judge you.
Please bear in mind that anything I say is just my humble opinion.

*Reading* *Reading* *Reading* *Reading* *Reading*
It is my honour to read your work.
Use whatever you can and send the rest fluttering off into the ether for another day

I am reviewing your poem, "Invalid Item" Open in new Window. today as part Level 3 in the Senior Mods Birthday Challenge.
I found this on The Writers Cramp

*Delight* *Delight* *Delight*

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The header gives clear information about the poem.
If you added a cover image it would increase the visual impact.
It satisfies the contest requirements with great wit.

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I love the irreverent tone of this poem.
The picture it paints is decidedly wacky.
I laughed out loud as I imagined the scene in my head.

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The poem is couched in 7 quatrains with perfect rhyming couplets.
The rhymes flow naturally and are unforced.

*Star* My favourite line *Star*
Ricardo moved back and the last birds were first

*Check3*
This nonsense poem is a joy to read.
Grammar and Punctuation are exemplary.


*Smile* Thank you so much for allowing me the privilege of reading your work. *Smile*
I hope my remarks are of use to you

sincerely,

teerich

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