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I am reviewing your piece because...

*Anything I say is just my humble opinion. Use whatever you can and send the rest out to the writing pixies for use another day. *Fairyl*

*Star* Hook

*Starbl* Tone and Mood

*Starbl* Grammar/Punctuation

*Starbr* Final Notes

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