Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group! Oh, but you already know who I am! Been awhile since I have bothered harassed reviewed you!

How I found your piece...I was just putzing around and found your piece on the random review page. I just had to read your poem!

First impressions...Loved it, as always!

Was the title interesting...The title is what drew me in, that along with the poet!

Was the content rating appropriate...absolutely, nothing above an 'e' in this one.

Did you use a specific form of poetry...yes, quatrains.

Did you follow the form...you did a great job following the form, but I expected no less from you!

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...yes, abab

Did the rhymes seem forced...no they were all natural sounding- excellent job!

Were words forced to fit syllable count...no

Was there rhythm and flow...you did a great job moving from line to line and stanza to stanza.

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...none noted, and I would let you know if I saw any...

Things I would change...it was a wonderful poem and I would not change anything. It is perfect as written.

Favorite parts/lines...
These were my favorite lines..

He toiled 'till the job was through,
the colored quilt of leaves piled high,
then ran and in the air he flew –
his laughter filled the autumn sky!

I loved the expression colored quilt of leaves... what wonderful imagery!
I also loved the image of this older gentleman raking and then jumping in the leaves...giggling the whole time!

Excellent work - as always!

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