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Given: Sep 3, 2014 at 5:24pm
Length: 512 Characters |
512 w/o WritingML
The story so far is intriguing, AI enhancements will give you a lot of room for creativity. The dialogue between the character's is well done and I think you've done a great job of capturing how age in reflected in how they relate to each other. I did notice the Stiker's name changed to Strider or was that a different character?
You could add more of how Alexa feels as she adapts to her AI changes, it would help us become more familiar with her character.
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