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Nice Signature Made For Me by b.meridith!

What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost*I was looking for a new poem to read that followed a specific format. I am not sure what the Rondeau does, but you might want to add the requirements to this at some point. Your poem flows very well and I think you know what you are doing with the format better than I would.

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how time changes things. It can even make things better and more clear. The things that annoy you so much when you are young can be endearing over time. You might even miss them when they are gone.

I think we do evolve and can't help changing. You wouldn't want to stop growing and learning. It is something that all relationships struggle with, if they are lucky enough to endure.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I like this part in particlar:

"In autumn blush, nature always reneges.
See the mulberries deflate of vigor
it doesn’t take a Sherlock—
love grows weary of the time.


I like that you say love grows weary of the time instead of weary of the person. There is a big difference between the two.

This is a thoughtful poem and I enjoyed reading it. I think I will give mr. hooves an extra kiss when I see him. We have been together a very long time.

Well done!



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THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

*Pumpkin*DISCLAIMER*Witchhat*

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read.

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